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Commotion Collection -- Rock n Roll


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I didn't make this for a challenge or crop, but because I got this collection and wanted to use it!

 

Constructive criticism welcome. I'm not sure I like the placement of the title and text. The torn border I made at the top by blending paper with the torn cardboard embellishment doesn't look as I had in mind either.

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I love the colours (this is one of my fav collections too!) . I love your photos and the journaling and especially that blended photo! Nice!

 

Since you asked....I do have a couple of suggestions for you. :) You mentioned that the torn edge doesn't look like you wanted it too....did you try messing around with the opacity? Maybe that, coupled with one of the blending modes, might allow some of the texture, that the original has, to come through. You also said you aren't too sure about the placement of your title & text. I love where you have your title. What if you place the journaling text beside it, over the photos...maybe make it fit in a long, rectangular space (two or three visually long sentences), and then move your tag to a vertical position along the right edge of the large photo. In order to not cut off the other photo, just place the tag facing inward towards the large photo instead of outward (which would overlap the other photo).

 

Anyway.....just some ideas to play with....it really is an adorable layout and the final product has to be something you love. :)

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