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My first ever digital page

heather_dw

02 November 2011 - 10:52 PM

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Uploading this to get opinions. I was going to make a two page spread, so this isn't done. I also need something through the middle, it looks lacking. Wanting to get opinions and critiques. The papers and embellishments were free downloads in a set called Sea glass. This is my very first attempt, so please point me in the right direction? Thanks!

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BarbaraC1977

02 November 2011 - 11:34 PM | Permalink: #1

Heather--how nice! You're off to a great start already. I'd love to see the second page of the spread, too, when you're ready. I like how the ribbon echoes the scallop shapes. Welcome to Scrap Girls!

Belle

03 November 2011 - 01:47 AM | Permalink: #2

I love the papers, colors and the ribbon. I like where you are going so far and would love to see the second page. I'm not good enough to give advice but 'white space' also works. Welcome to Scrap Girls.

Sara Arell

03 November 2011 - 05:06 AM | Permalink: #3

Welcome to Scrap Girls! You're doing great! I love the papers and the colors you've chosen too. I'm certainly not good enough to give advice either but agree with Belle that "white space works well" and you've done a beautiful job keeping your white space! Very pretty!

MariJ

03 November 2011 - 07:01 AM | Permalink: #4

Hi Heather! Welcome and it was so nice to meet you in the chat last night.. Fun, huh?
Your first attempt is lovely! I too, would like to see the second page and how they'd go together. But, other than that I love your layout, pretty background and how you framed your photos.
I really like the ribbon dancing along the bottom and my only suggestion might be an embellishment cluster on the bottom left of the bottom pic? But, I"m no expert and it's really great as is!
Glad you're here and posting! Keep up the good work.

CRS

03 November 2011 - 07:59 AM | Permalink: #5

I wish my first page looked this nice! I love how you tucked string behind the top photo and the colors are so relaxing and soft. I can't wait to see the next page.

englishrose

03 November 2011 - 09:58 AM | Permalink: #6

Great start to your scrapbooking journey Heather. You have a good eye for complementary colours. Suggestion - maybe have the 2 photos overlapping and more centred on the page? Keep looking at the newsletter and the gallery and you'll get loads of inspiration. I will look out for further postings from you on the gallery in the future.

lorac

05 November 2011 - 07:34 AM | Permalink: #7

Great start to your first layout. Going to check out your redo next.

mbechtloff

14 November 2011 - 04:40 PM | Permalink: #8

it looks good so far!!! very impressed. suggestion ... maybe move the bottom pic to the left a little, and then if the second page mirrors the image, you could do a fancy title with a couple embellishments in the middle space there. just a thought though, can't wait to see what you do with it.

~Kiana~

16 March 2012 - 10:27 AM | Permalink: #9

Very great for a first page. I was not this good on mine!!