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at the cottage #2




musical night 2
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at the cottage #2
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BarbaraC1977 

23 January 2012 - 10:30 AM | Permalink: #1
They're both cute layouts. I like this one better; I personally like a little asymmetry to give some movement to a layout. I think this is a very good layout, and you shouldn't fret too much. But I know you're not thrilled, and wanted ideas. The only suggestions I might make is to add something like a light-colored swirl effect/embellishment to peek out from behind the photo mat and journaling, again, to add some movement. I'm thinking Swirlicious, or something like that. I like the blue mat behind the photo frames. Would it work even better if the background blue was a little softer/grayer? The photos are great and you want them to be the stars.

In any case, you have a wonderful layout, capturing memories of a very special day! Thanks for sharing.

Belle 

23 January 2012 - 10:57 AM | Permalink: #2
I also like this one. I love the template and the photos are great.

teecee 

23 January 2012 - 11:07 AM | Permalink: #3
I like this one better too. I agree with Barbara's suggestions and the only other thing I see that you might want to think about is the journaling text. The black text is hard to see against the brown background. You could possibly change the text to a lighter shade, perhaps a light gray or white so it would stand out against the brown background. It's a great layout with wonderful, fun photos! ;)

KFiasco 

23 January 2012 - 06:23 PM | Permalink: #4
I like this one better too. The only suggestion is like Theresa I would change the text to a lighter shade. I love the arrangement of the photos and love the blue background.

Karen

PBarnes 

23 January 2012 - 06:53 PM | Permalink: #5
I prefer this one too. The other one is too "stacked." I like that this layout breaks up the space in a more interesting way. I agree with the others about the color of the text on the tab. I like Barbara's idea of the swirl behind the mats.

CRS 

23 January 2012 - 09:03 PM | Permalink: #6
The bracket shape definitely adds interest. I like this one better!

kimmybutton 

24 January 2012 - 08:03 AM | Permalink: #7
Yup, I like this one the best also! Great pics! The bracket journaling adds interest. I would think about making the text lighter as it is a little difficult to read. Great LO!
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