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Monogram Art Help!

aepona_00

27 May 2012 - 09:48 PM

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I am trying to create monogram art for my daughter's nursery room. Her name is Jayna, and I wanted to do her name as individual letters to either frame or print and put on canvas blocks for wall decor. I love the "One Yellow Paper" collection by Brandy Murray, which is actually the inspiration for my decorating theme for the nursery. This is what I have come up with for the first letter using that collection. It just feels like something is off though, and I can't quite put my finger on it. Hoping someone can give me some great suggestions to really make it pop!

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How can I make the text clear but unobtrusive?

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A-M

28 May 2012 - 01:34 AM | Permalink: #1

What you are doing is a lovely idea. I do like this with being black and white and just a pop of yellow colour. Personally the thing I feel is not quite right is the letter itself. It gives the impression of just being a long swirl. Maybe if you turned it to be more upright.
Hope this helps.

DixieLee

28 May 2012 - 02:07 AM | Permalink: #2

Yes, at first i was not sure it was a letter either. I do like the papers you used and the ultrasound pic tucked in there!

ValerieT

28 May 2012 - 05:39 AM | Permalink: #3

I agree with Anne-Marie. When I saw the layout on the forum home page, it just looked like a swirl, I didn't realise it was meant to be a letter. The frame with the ultra sound pic, bow and flowers is beautiful