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CRITIQUE PLEASE - "UNITED"
 
© &copy MSS Creations 2007

CRITIQUE PLEASE - "UNITED"


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Every year we go to my DSS's house for a dinner to celebrate Chanukah and Christmas. We give the kids most of their Chanukah presents (except the big gift which we give at our friends' annual Chanukah party) and all of their Christmas presents if we know that we can't give them their gifts Christmas morning.

The year of these pictures, the party must have been after Christmas because the photo collection I took them from has my DSDIL showing everyone's Xmas gifts to us. Anyhow, this is my LO and the particulars:

 

Sketch - Sketch #1 from Marni Adam's 20 Skethes ebook - A WONDERFUL BOOK!!!

 

Embellishments: Christmas - Taken from the Internet over the years. Unfortunately I didn't know to organize these by website, so sources are u/k.

Chanukah - (1) Scrapbook Playground's ScrappyStitches_ScrappyStitcher_Hanukkah_ribbon01

(2) " " ScrappySticher_Hanukkah_Candles

 

Fonts: Subtitle: Mickey's Merry Christmas

Title: " " "

Text: Journal

 

Journal Text: What does it take to blend 2 faiths?

 

It takes LOVE

& let takes COMPROMISE

It takes PARTICIPATION

Most of all it takes RESPECT.

 

PAPERS: Red - Scrapbooks Gone Digital's 4 Generation's black_red_textures paper

Snow Paper - from the Internet years ago, source u/k

 

EFFECTS: Added Preset PSP XI Rectangle with line style Arrowhead-Ball to middle picture. To the other 2 pictures I added Effects-------->3D--------->

Chisel.

 

Does this layout work? Is it too busy? I'm just not sure. Do I have too much focus on my focal point?

 

Thx for looking!

 

Love,

Marilyn/spartica

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Nice job. I really like the title and journaling. As for CC, maybe add some subtle drop shadows, especially to the ribbons. The white ribbon and lefthand photo look a little distorted, like maybe you resized it in one dimension more than the other. TFS!

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