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Precious memories, precious sacred scenes unfold
Never too old
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Ro 

22 March 2012 - 07:11 PM | Permalink: #1
One thing that could help the readability of the layout is to left-justify it rather than center it. People's eyes have a hard time with a lot of text that is centered. It's because we are used to how books are laid out, etc.

I would also use paragraphs, even if that meant that you had a smaller picture of the truck. Or - even better - I think I'd make this a double-page layout. One side would have the story with paragraphs. The other side could have the truck with some embellishments, a title, dates, etc.

I LOVE that you are telling the story.

Hope that helps!

sanot 

22 March 2012 - 07:39 PM | Permalink: #2
thanks Ro, hadn't thought about the justification, or the paragraph idea. I had thought about the double page layout, thanks for bringing that up.

AggieB 

22 March 2012 - 09:09 PM | Permalink: #3
Congratulations on your new vehicle! I was going to suggest breaking up the text, but you've already heard from the pros. Looking forward to seeing what you come up with!

sanot 

22 March 2012 - 09:40 PM | Permalink: #4
so I made changes (I think it looks MUCH better, thanks!) how do you suggest I post the new one with changes? don't want to take up space in the gallery if there's a better way...

Becster 

22 March 2012 - 09:51 PM | Permalink: #5
You could edit this post and simply upload the new image to replace it. I've done that before when I've had to correct typos. :)

sanot 

22 March 2012 - 10:04 PM | Permalink: #6
thanks Becster...that's what I did....would love more CC!

jode2771 

23 March 2012 - 12:35 AM | Permalink: #7
I love the story, but I think being a two pager and the story being the focus you could shrink the title down and move some of the journalling around... The picture could be smaller too... Make the journalling the star... perhaps the title could even run sideways down the page to save space? (not running top to bottom but left to right but rotate it 90degrees). Just a thought :-)

sanot 

23 March 2012 - 06:39 AM | Permalink: #8
thanks for your suggestions Jode! I appreciate them.
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