KFiasco Posted June 9, 2014 Share Posted June 9, 2014 My sister died 2 years ago and as some of you already know I want to make a book for my mom with pictures, poems, prayers, and thoughts of the people who loved her. Here is my first attempt, but I need help. I don't know if the color saturation is OK on the cluster and word art. Should I tone it down, or not? Also should I add her dates of birth and death? Where would you put them. Should I introduce more color? Any help you can give me would be much appreciated. Thanks, Karen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alsoarty Posted June 9, 2014 Share Posted June 9, 2014 I would add the dates. I can help a little if you'd like? It looks like the cluster is a lower opacity like the photo. You could take the opacity up to 100% on that. I'd also blend in the photo a bit more, and then add a full opacity to the same photo and just make it smaller and in a frame. HTH. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
englishrose Posted June 9, 2014 Share Posted June 9, 2014 There's so much in this LO that is "spot on" but I think Andrea's suggestions would add to the overall effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CRS Posted June 9, 2014 Share Posted June 9, 2014 I agree with Andrea. You have a great start!! What an amazing treasure for your Mom! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MariJ Posted June 9, 2014 Share Posted June 9, 2014 Your layout is so special and Andrea's suggestions sound great. What a lovely book you will have. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KFiasco Posted June 10, 2014 Author Share Posted June 10, 2014 Thanks, everyone, I have a lot to do and so appreciate Andreas suggestions and can't wait to make some changes. Karen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smiles Posted June 10, 2014 Share Posted June 10, 2014 You're off to a great start! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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