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Beautiful LO !

It is a beautiful layout. Perhaps change flower or remove it.

This is a wonderful LO and a great memoir to your brother. I love the bit of journaling

Nice job!! Love the paper and frame. The journaling is the perfect touch.

good choice of journaling paper. Keeps the photo as the focal point.

I like this version better than the first one, but I might suggest you bring the Alpha down just a little bit, so that the lower third of some of the letters are on the journal paper. I think it might show up a little better. I hope you don't feel like we're picking on you!! It's a beautiful layout and your journaling is very special.

Beautiful. The journaling really makes it. Great Job.

I think adding the journaling really finished it off! I'm sure your family will love this, so special.

simply beautiful, what a loving tribute